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My second entry to :icontelophase:'s contest.

I tried very hard to make the character look realistic but ~sigh~ It wasn't meant to be. :'d

I hope you don't find the plot too lame. It was a difficult title and it took me a while to think up what it should be about.
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I like the eyes. (The mouth is a little awkward though.) I also like the text.

This reminds me of Fruits Basket. Don't ask me why... :XD:

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~Laura28182 Oct 1, 2009  Student Filmographer
I agree, the mouth is a little off centre and I think the eyes could have been better because of the messy lineart.
But I'm glad you like the text_I took the font off the site you suggested to me about a year ago :iconlovecuddleplz:
Also you made a great guess_I used my copies of Fruits Basket to help me make the layout for the cover. like where to put the barcode and such:D

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Proverbs 27:17
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:iconmagneriaasteridge:
No, I think you did a good job coloring :)

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Screw this, I'm going to Narnia!
"You know, logic has a brother. His name is SHUT THE HELL UP." ~ Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Abridged
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~Laura28182 Aug 13, 2009  Student Filmographer
Thanks_I appreciate it :iconlovecuddleplz:but I still would have liked some parts to have come out better but never mind ;)

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:iconmagneriaasteridge:
Take it from someone who's been rushing to make these... it looks awesome!

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~Nim~
Screw this, I'm going to Narnia!
"You know, logic has a brother. His name is SHUT THE HELL UP." ~ Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Abridged
:meditate::spyed::spyed2::ninjaeat::ninja::katana::ninjabattle::ninjastar::ninjaplot::ninjadart::yakuza::teleport:
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~Laura28182 Aug 15, 2009  Student Filmographer
Thanks again_I hope you finish yours in time_ if so best of luck in the contest :hug:

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Proverbs 27:17
People learn from one another, just as iron sharpens iron.
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:iconmagneriaasteridge:
Thanks! I finished my first one, and I'm working on the second! :hug: Best of luck to you too! :D

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~Nim~
Screw this, I'm going to Narnia!
"You know, logic has a brother. His name is SHUT THE HELL UP." ~ Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Abridged
:meditate::spyed::spyed2::ninjaeat::ninja::katana::ninjabattle::ninjastar::ninjaplot::ninjadart::yakuza::teleport:
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Very attractive layout, I really like the coloring again, and the drawing is very nice. :3
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~Laura28182 Jul 25, 2009  Student Filmographer
Thanks ~ It took me a while to plan the layout :dd
& :heart: I quite liked the sketch too. He looked actually half decent.

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~MapleRose Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
love the eyes and hair, and the texture of the book cover is awesome :D The only odd thing I can see is that the character's mouth is slightly off-center, and a bit too small ^^;

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